https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ygcWutzeL_c
I really think the third time was the charm! I am honestly getting so used to giving this pitch that I didn't even need to think about it! The first time I filmed it, it took me about 10-15 takes to finally get one that was good enough. This time, I sat down and did it in one shot! It surprised me that I was able to make it through this so easily without having to practice it!
I didn't really receive much feedback from my last pitch. Everyone told me that my second draft was much better than my first. I realized I could still improve it. I wanted to feel much more comfortable with talking in front of the camera, and it worked!
Hi Maria,
ReplyDeleteI really like your post and how descriptive you were in your elevator pitch! You seemed much more confident and clear on the issue that you are presenting compared to the first one. It was overall really great! Thanks for sharing your idea!
Hi, Maria!
ReplyDeleteI can see so much improvement through all of your elevator pitches! Your initial opening to your elevator pitch is where I can see your confidence shine through. You seem like you are not only very informed about your product, but you also really believe in what you're selling which, as a costumer, is a huge indicator that your product is useful!
Great post :)